无标题无名氏No.68429749

2026-04-05(日)04:55:03 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<According to the Confederacy, all of the KMs were monsters. Bruckner was - no doubt about that. But this guy? Raynor wasn’t so sure.>

人与人之间的战争很少有差别。大家都是普通人，拿枪的小士兵也是遵从命令。只有抹去对手的人性才能使人们开火时少一分犹豫和罪恶感，相信雷诺也是明白这一点的。

- Ch.24

无标题无名氏No.68429756

2026-04-05(日)04:59:49 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Then the lizard was off, scurrying the length of the shelf to the point where it could jump down onto a tool box, and from there to the floor. After that it was a short run to the open door, the fold-down stairs, and the hot sand that waited beyond.>

有时候给角色一个名字就相当于给了角色一个有血有肉的身份，加上一些小细节，立刻就会使人物生动起来。这最后一笔可谓是升华了情节，点亮了主题，很棒。

- Ch.24

无标题无名氏No.68430087

2026-04-05(日)09:27:31 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

下午在图书馆看书来着，所以需要补录一些吐槽。(*ﾟ∇ﾟ)

<“They fell from the heavens, and they fought like hell to free the Confederate POWs held deep inside KM territory. No one else could have done it. No one else did. That’s how the Heaven’s Devils earned their name.” -Captain Clair Hobarth, decorated POW, in an interview with Max Speer January 2489>

So that’s how they got their name.

- Ch.25
15:01

无标题无名氏No.68430114

2026-04-05(日)09:34:55 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<“Ark Bennet?” he inquired, as the group walked past. “We’d like to speak with you.”>

OMG not this. 虽然知道早晚会有这么一遭，但我现在其实有点不希望Kydd回家族，他回去之后很难说会发生什么。他爹要么要求他洗掉在陆战队的经历，重新回到商业领域，要么做掉他这个儿子，否则还能怎样？我是不觉得他家人会那么好心，也就他母亲可能会捞捞他，但是也难说。

- Ch.25
15:04

无标题无名氏No.68430204

2026-04-05(日)10:02:28 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Did he want to go back to being Ark Benett - Son of privilege, a businessman, and head of an Old Family? Or did he want to be Ryk Kydd - Soldier, sniper and adventurer?>

有意思，这里竟然提出问题了。不知是体现Kydd心中的犹豫，还是向读者抛出一个引子，我以为作者在这里不会体现选择或是犹豫的，不过这样写更好，也是我乐意看到的。

- Ch.25
15:12

无标题无名氏No.68430246

2026-04-05(日)10:16:09 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Kydd looked immediately at Corly, who nodded sagely and smiled. “You’re a lifer, boy. Pure and simple.” He pressed both hands on the table. “This case is closed.”>

我看样子当过兵的人总是会对军人有一种特别的感情，理解？照顾？还是感同身受？都有吧，总之这种感情很多时候会使军人们像是一家人。（笑

- Ch.25
15:21

无标题无名氏No.68430267

2026-04-05(日)10:23:08 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Tychus grinned broadly, Raynor looked embarrassed, Harnack struck a pose, Kydd gazed around in awe, Zander frowned disapprovingly, Ward stared at his hands, and Doc was too high to know what was going on.”

Omg lmao.
等一下哈……我有个猜测……不过还是看完再说吧。

- Ch.25
15:26

无标题无名氏No.68430358

2026-04-05(日)10:42:31 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Was that what Raynor was supposed to be fighting for? A society in which citizens were transformed into flesh-and-blood robots?>

More than that, I assume.

- Ch.26
15:52

无标题无名氏No.68430392

2026-04-05(日)10:51:41 ID: 8LHEXY2 (PO主)

<Raynor signed. “If you’re done eating my lunch, let’s go inside. It’s raining out here.”>

dbq但我真的很想笑哈哈哈哈哈哈哈哈

- Ch.26
15:59